Brothers Of War-Chapter one:The beginning
On the other side of the battle field in space aboard the Destroyer class Chaos marine battle barge,in the control room there was a throne like chair sat a large fallen space marine in pure black power armor with blood red pauldrons with the mark of chaos on them.His helmet looked very much like a demons skull the eyes glowed red with crimson chaos energy and rage,hate and blood lust he his hands over a evilly ornate long sword that coursed with chaoitic energy.And it was pitch black and looked jagged and extremly sharp the hilt guard was a snake wrapping around a cross,the commander of the ship walked up to him hesaitently and said in a shaky tone"m-m-my lord....we have critically wounded there command ship.....should we finish them?...."the Chaos marine looked at him from the corner of his eyes and he thought to himself'knowing my brother he will proably head to the planet surface.....heheheh fool....i will crush you.....'the commander spoke up again asking him again"w-w-what would you like us to do my lord?...."he glared at him for interrupting his thoughts and said in a dark and almost demonic tone"no......let it go....i wish to crush them on the battle field with my own hands.....i will take my men and fight them on the ground as you crush the rest of there navy ships.....do i make myself clear?....you fail me and i will let the chaos god tear your soul to pices and watch you suffer...."the commander gulped and nods slowly and says"crystal clear my lord...i-i-i will not fail you...."the chaos marine grunted and stood up slowly his armor creaking as he stood he walked over a soft thud as he walked over to the PA system.The two men manning the counsels near it sweating a little as he came closer truly afraid of him.He picked up the mic and said over it"Servants of Chaos.....it is I your chapter Master Brother Blood Asp.....and i am speaking to you to tell you to perpare for combat ready yourself for the fight of the century we will crush those imperial dogs like ants we will rip out there hearts and sacrfice them to the gods.......we will show them the power of the courpting Venom fallen space marine chapter!....now servants of chaos!.....LETS DROWN THIS PLANET IN BLOODDDDD!!! HAHAHAHAHAH"he slammed the mic down as he heard the marines in the ship howl and roar with battle cries.he sheathed his blade and before he could leave a man in a chaos sorcerers outfit said"Chapter master Blood....Take this weapon...."he hands him a large battle ax that was decorated with the bones of foes of the user of the ax.He took it from his hand and said"hmmmm it will do it's part....you stay here and make sure these dogs don't turn tail and run...."the sorcerer bowed and said"i will my lord.....wipe them all out..."Blood gripped the ax and walked said as he left"oh i will brother....i will...."
in the hanger bay of the emperors wrath the space marines where rushing to gather there gear and ammo,there where different kinds of marines,from Terminators to jet pack and recon marines to the normal space marine Davik watched as they got to there drop pods and thunder hawk drop ships,as he watched carefully he heard a loud thumping sound he turned to face the sound that was coming towards him and saw what it was.It was a large mech known as a Dreadnought,but this one was different he was known as a venrable dreadnought.He was a warrior who had some stature in the command structure of his chapter.The mech was out fitted with a vulcan las cannon it was a new form of weapon for a dreadnought it could punch through armor like a las cannon but could fire fast like a vulcan cannon,Davik smirked and said to the dreadnought"is that you Brother Dresdon?...."the sound of a man laughing softly"aye it is me chapter master Davik....."Davik smiled and said"it is good to have you with us brother....."Dresdon chuckled and said"it is a honor to be here my lord.....but you must excuse me...heheh i have to get set to drop...."Davik nods and says"i'll see you on the ground Brother Dresdon...."Dresdon stomps off to get set as Davik walks down to the hanger deck and sees a group of devastator marines setting up there heavy bolters there Sargent Cadius he was a hell of a soldier and a hell of a devastator marine.he was a bit rough around the edges when it came to being a human being he was a bit of a prick as some of the marines affectionatly call him.Cadius looked at his fellow marines and said"you guys ready to do this?.....we'll do fine don't worry about nothing and one more thing.....don't be praying in the middle of a fight do that in the drop ship or befroe NOT in the fight....you got me?..."davik chuckled and said"heheh still just as rough around the edges as normal huh?...."Cadius chuckled and said"aye i am my Lord...."Davik smirked and said"heheh good we're gonna need you on your toes Cadius...."Cadius nods and says with a stern look"i will,...i swear to you...."Davik pats him on the back and says"good go get set up....we're about to leave...."he nods and gets his men up and ready to move as they waited for one last word from there chapter master and from there Chaplin
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heyyy guys here's the the first chapter of it the last one was more or less to see if i could really do this and i have a feeling i can just idk if i can get very far with it
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Français Avec Le Masque Blanc Et Les Yeux Rouge.
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"My power comes from Chaos....my life is devorted to the Chaos gods....all the worlds i've been to have bowed to my will or have drowned in there own blood.......will your world meet the same fate?....."Blood Asp Chapter master of Corrupting Venom S.M.C.
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Français Avec Le Masque Blanc Et Les Yeux Rouge.
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"My power comes from Chaos....my life is devorted to the Chaos gods....all the worlds i've been to have bowed to my will or have drowned in there own blood.......will your world meet the same fate?....."Blood Asp Chapter master of Corrupting Venom S.M.C.
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Français Avec Le Masque Blanc Et Les Yeux Rouge.
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"My power comes from Chaos....my life is devorted to the Chaos gods....all the worlds i've been to have bowed to my will or have drowned in there own blood.......will your world meet the same fate?....."Blood Asp Chapter master of Corrupting Venom S.M.C.
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Français Avec Le Masque Blanc Et Les Yeux Rouge.
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"My power comes from Chaos....my life is devorted to the Chaos gods....all the worlds i've been to have bowed to my will or have drowned in there own blood.......will your world meet the same fate?....."Blood Asp Chapter master of Corrupting Venom S.M.C.
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[link] <--- just a prologue of the story me and gamefreakjl wrote
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"My power comes from Chaos....my life is devorted to the Chaos gods....all the worlds i've been to have bowed to my will or have drowned in there own blood.......will your world meet the same fate?....."Blood Asp Chapter master of Corrupting Venom S.M.C.
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